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Don't give up on love
Don't give up on life.
Don't even think about
touching that silver-handled knife!

There ARE people who love you,
and if you died,
they would die too.

To them it doesn't matter
how much you may have lied,
they will love you anyway,
all night and through the day.

So don't get any sadder,
cheer up while you still can.
Smile wide for everyone,
and go out and have some fun!

And if someone asks,
you can proudly say:

"It's because I didn't give up on love,
And I didn't give up on life.
I also left alone
that silver-handled knife!"


-Devyn Bruce
©2008-2009 ~bi-animelover665
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I wrote this for my girlfriend whom i love oh so very much

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:iconhitsugayatoshirou92:
Aww! I cried when I read that on the bus.

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Don't let those idiots who say that you're not good enough for them get you down, because the truth is... they're not good enough for you!! ~:heart: :glomp:
:iconhitsugayatoshirou92:
But, it was for your girlfriend... you know what I mean!

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Don't let those idiots who say that you're not good enough for them get you down, because the truth is... they're not good enough for you!! ~:heart: :glomp:
:iconmancandy89:
oh shit dude have you read my poems? WOW that's like the total opposite of my stuff and i think i need to think about that..
:iconbi-animelover665:
lol thats funny
but i like your poems, they are great

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muwahaha... :popcorn:
:iconmancandy89:
thank you I like the way you write too! I just get so depressed sometimes and it's because of the same damn guy .. he drives me crazy cuz i love him so much and he loves me back but we can't be together
:iconbi-animelover665:
i have the exact same problem!!
ecxept he never told me we were done, he just started dating another girl and left me to guess because he never talked to me after that
and it was on the first day of school too, so that really sucked
its funny cuz everyday when i see him my one friend and i have to try and keepeachother from going and beating that stupid kid up...the other day we actually started shaking because he was threatening her in one of the classes they have together

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muwahaha... :popcorn:
:iconsecretkarmaserenade:
:iconbigheartplz: Its lovely writing dear! :glomp: I read this and got teary eyed. ^^ You should enter a few poetry contests :nod:
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:iconbi-animelover665:
oh my god thank you soo much
it means so much that you think im good

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muwahaha... :popcorn:

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